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Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

Poetry Thread!

Every forum needs a poetry thread. Post any interesting poems you might have here.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _LionHeart - permalink

Go and catch a falling star, Get with child a mandrake root, Tell me where all past years are, Or who cleft the devil's foot, Teach me to hear mermaids' singing, Or to keep off envy's stinging, And find What wind Serves to advance an honest mind.

If thou be'st born to strange sights, Things invisible go see, Ride ten thousand days and nights, Till Age snow white hairs on thee; Thou, when thou return'st, wilt tell me All strange wonders that befell thee, And swear No where Lives a woman true and fair.

If thou find'st one, let me know; Such a pilgrimage were sweet, Yet do not; I would not go, Though at next door we might meet. Though she were true when you met her, And last till you write your letter Yet she Will be False, ere I come, to two or three.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by supergogogirl - permalink

Kay this is mroe of a song... but whatever

I was walking down the street saying gooday to all I meet though I had wished them well they said they'd sooner see me in hell.

So I went into my neighbours pantry, I wanted to make love but can she? 'didnt say a single word but after my vision was blurred.

The cookies all tried to shoo me, This isn't real but it could be. Then I saw my sugar, whoring like she usually do. Sharing here sweets with salt I knew this was all my fault. I thought how this problem could be ressolved, so I poured water on them and soon they dissovled.

My heart soon filled with lonely my brain wondered if only. To stop the pain I took the happy pills, So I was in a happy land beyond the magic hills, where fish can fly and mama don't lie ...in a land that never existed this is real...

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _thefirstloser - permalink

This is not original to myself of course. It was written by Walt Whitman, the father of true American poetry, the inventor of free verse (meter-less and rhyme-less poetry), and also one of the last to use it correctly. This excerpt is from his last two sections of "Song of Myself."

The spotted hawk swoops by and accuses me, he complains of my gab and my loitering.

I too am not a bit tamed, I too am untranslatable,
I sound my barbaric yawp over the roofs of the world.

The last scud of day holds back for me,
It flings my likeness after the rest and true as any on the shadow'd wilds,

It coaxes me to the vapor and the dusk.

I depart as air, I shake my white locks at the runaway sun,
I effuse my flesh in eddies, and drift it in lacy jags.

I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow from the grass I love,
If you want me again look for me under your boot-soles.

You will hardly know who I am or what I mean,
But I shall be good health to you nevertheless,
And filter and fibre your blood.

Failing to fetch me at first keep encouraged,
Missing me one place search another,
I stop somewhere waiting for you.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

Wow, this is more popular than I thought. Here's two of mine that I did for school:

Many things can make a difference, But most of them just don?t make sense. Why volunteer when you can get paid? Why end things peacefully, when you can go have a raid? Why do homework, when you can bribe your teacher? Why go to church, when it doesn?t matter to your preacher?

Then there are the things that don?t really matter, Like making cities go BOOM and splatter. Like blowing things up, or running them over, Like torching makeup with a flamethrower, Like firing A-bombs at random cities, Like destroying the FBI, and other such committees.

Many things can make a difference, With varying degrees of benevolence, You can tell which differences are real, And the above that are counterfeit.

The following is a Valentines poem from Death to George Bush.

I love you like the sword loves blood, With reasons that are as clear as mud. I loved the ways that you cause so much death, The number of people who take their last breath. I love you because of the chaos you cause, The utter anarchy, without any laws. I?ve never before been in love?s jaws, But now I am, and you deserved applause. But now you might be thinking, why should I love you, When I have Dick Cheney, or Michael Jackson too? I?m much better looking than that gay fruit, I have this wicked hood, with a sickle to boot. If I?m still overweighed by your clown and attendant, Just remember, I can kill you in an instant. But together, we can do great things, Your plan to destroy the world will take wings. Brother against Brother, and cities blow up, Entrails splattered everywhere that no one will cleanup. As you can see, I?m better than that Cheney suck-up, And I clearly overweigh that Jackson f***up. So now it?s down to the question, will you be mine, Evil, malicious, Valentine?

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _LionHeart - permalink

we should make this a sticky

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by lethal - permalink

Sure, why not. Anything to create activity here on the forums. :P

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

Everyone loves poetry.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by Human - permalink

i don't love poetry

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

Yeah, go ahead and spoil all my fun.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Cyrus - permalink

Actually I'm willing to bet that most people don't like poetry. I don't mind it, here's one that my girlfriend wrote:

Dreaming, Only of you. Wanting, Only you. Forever.

Life, Everything, All I love, I find in you. I want you.

I can think only of how sweet it is, To taste your lips, To feel your arms around me.

Please, Won?t you hold me once more, Won?t you embrace me, Light the fire once again, Please.

I want to spend forever with you, Spend forever in your arms. We belong together, I?m so happy I have you.

Every moment, I think of you, Long for you, Hope for you, To come to me.

Together, For always, We should be, Forever more.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by supergogogirl - permalink

seems kinda like a poem a cam whore would write :-P

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Cyrus - permalink

Lmao, who knows what the future may hold? :D

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

Yeah, I don't like most kinds of poetry, but the negative ones are pretty nice.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _thefirstloser - permalink

Another Whitman poem, if anyone is still interested. I really feel Walt Whitman is an author every male should read atleast once in his life. If anyone is interested in his works pretty much all of them can be found here: http://www.whitmanarchive.org/

Another excerpt from 'Song of Myself':

My sun has his sun and round him obediently wheels,
He joins with his partners a group of superior circuit,
And greater sets follow, making specks of the greatest inside them.

There is no stoppage and never can be stoppage,
If I, you, and the worlds, and all beneath or upon their surfaces, were this moment reduced back to a pallid float, it would not avail in the long run,

We should surely bring up again where we now stand,
And surely go as much farther, and then farther and farther.

A few quadrillions of eras, a few octillions of cubic leagues, do not hazard the span or make it impatient,

They are but parts, any thing is but a part.

See ever so far, there is limitless space outside of that,
Count ever so much, there is limitless time around that.

My rendezvous is appointed, it is certain,
The Lord will be there and wait till I come on perfect terms,
The great Camerado, the lover true for whom I pine will be there.

I know I have the best of time and space, and was never measured and never will be measured.

I tramp a perpetual journey, (come listen all!)
My signs are a rain-proof coat, good shoes, and a staff cut from the woods,

No friend of mine takes his ease in my chair,
I have no chair, no church, no philosophy,
I lead no man to a dinner-table, library, exchange,
But each man and each woman of you I lead upon a knoll,
My left hand hooking you round the waist,
My right hand pointing to landscapes of continents and the public road.

Not I, not any one else can travel that road for you,
You must travel it for yourself.

It is not far, it is within reach,
Perhaps you have been on it since you were born and did not know,

Perhaps it is everywhere on water and on land.

Shoulder your duds dear son, and I will mine, and let us hasten forth,

Wonderful cities and free nations we shall fetch as we go.

And another excerpt:

I understand the large hearts of heroes,
The courage of present times and all times,
How the skipper saw the crowded and rudderless wreck of the steam-ship, and Death chasing it up and down the storm,

How he knuckled tight and gave not back an inch, and was faith ful of days and faithful of nights,

And chalk'd in large letters on a board, Be of good cheer, we will not desert you;

How he follow'd with them and tack'd with them three days and would not give it up,

How he saved the drifting company at last,
How the lank loose-gown'd women look'd when boated from the side of their prepared graves,

How the silent old-faced infants and the lifted sick, and the sharp- lipp'd unshaved men;

All this I swallow, it tastes good, I like it well, it becomes mine,
I am the man, I suffer'd, I was there.

The disdain and calmness of martyrs,
The mother of old, condemn'd for a witch, burnt with dry wood, her children gazing on,

The hounded slave that flags in the race, leans by the fence, blow- ing, cover'd with sweat,

The twinges that sting like needles his legs and neck, the mur- derous buckshot and the bullets,

All these I feel or am.

I am the hounded slave, I wince at the bite of the dogs,
Hell and despair are upon me, crack and again crack the marks- men,

I clutch the rails of the fence, my gore dribs, thinn'd with the ooze of my skin,

I fall on the weeds and stones,
The riders spur their unwilling horses, haul close,
Taunt my dizzy ears and beat me violently over the head with whip-stocks.

Agonies are one of my changes of garments,
I do not ask the wounded person how he feels, I myself become the wounded person,

My hurts turn livid upon me as I lean on a cane and observe.

I am the mash'd fireman with breast-bone broken,
Tumbling walls buried me in their debris,
Heat and smoke I inspired, I heard the yelling shouts of my com- rades,

I heard the distant click of their picks and shovels,
They have clear'd the beams away, they tenderly lift me forth.

I lie in the night air in my red shirt, the pervading hush is for my sake,

Painless after all I lie exhausted but not so unhappy,
White and beautiful are the faces around me, the heads are bared of their fire-caps,

The kneeling crowd fades with the light of the torches.

Distant and dead resuscitate,
They show as the dial or move as the hands of me, I am the clock myself.

I am an old artillerist, I tell of my fort's bombardment,
I am there again.

Again the long roll of the drummers,
Again the attacking cannon, mortars,
Again to my listening ears the cannon responsive.

I take part, I see and hear the whole,

The cries, curses, roar, the plaudits for well-aim'd shots,
The ambulanza slowly passing trailing its red drip,
Workmen searching after damages, making indispensable repairs,
The fall of grenades through the rent roof, the fan-shaped explo sion,

The whizz of limbs, heads, stone, wood, iron, high in the air.

Again gurgles the mouth of my dying general, he furiously waves with his hand,

He gasps through the clot Mind not me?mind?the entrench ments.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by supergogogirl - permalink

Kay heres a song I wrote last night

Chorus: Fish live amoung us, they live in our hair, so you'd better be nice, so you'd better be fair.

Verse 1: And if you see a fish that you really wanna be, eat all your vegetables and then one you'll see.

Chorus.

Verse 2: And if you see a fish And you really hate her guts tell her that you love her then sleep around with sluts.

Chorus.

And fish swim together they form their little clique they'll push us around and call us the geeks.

Chorus.

Bridge: Fish live amoung us, they eat all our rice so pray for nuclear winter so they'll be trapped in ice. so pray for nuclear winter so they'll be trapped in ice.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Cyrus - permalink

Damn fish, they're always eating our rice.

Added 6 years, 10 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

My fish get fed once every couple weeks if they're lucky.

Added 6 years, 9 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

"Sacrifice"

Bracelets of fortune cleaved asunder Scarlet butterflies, roll of thunder White-hot lightning in empty spaces Fading thoughts, receding paces.

Leaving all known things behind Cold winds whirling through the mind. Waterfall of being, go Conscious thought join crimson flow.

Warm red tide of life, run faster Of my soul I am the master. Join the earth and join the mud Sacrifice of thee, my blood.

11/23&24/98

Untitled death poem

My heart a trembling butterfly So fearful and so frail My soul a swirling winter wind That howls to no avail My eyes twin orbs of wonderment Now growing still and drawn My life a fading ember Dark, and darker still, then gone.

11/25/98

Untitled poem

The darkness draws nigh, and I hunger to go with it To ride upon the wind and to fling my cares upon it To leave my life, cast it aside And be one with Forever. To feel no pain, no earthly sorrow To laugh with the stars and become Tomorrow But to the earth my soul is bound Until my life I sever.

Added 6 years, 9 months ago by _main try - permalink

here is some few I wrote a few years ago.

I wrote this four years ago when i broke up with my ex-GF

I try to be an individual i try to stay original i loved you so much my love was unconditional but you betrayed me like the slut that you are "I HATE YOU"I cant even expresse it in words How could you I gave you my hart i gave you my world you stole something from me that can never been replaced MY hart, now its a empty spot like a black hole in space

this about popmusic

I hate reality I hate PopMusic Its garbage i just cant listen to it it gets me in a bad mood, a lot of people dont want that damn i want the sweet good Mike, men kiss my a* Popmusic is even worse then hell They should banne the music the person who started it trow him in jail Britney spears the girl makes me sick cut off her tong men the girl cant sing boy bands men dont even get me started got a milion reason to hate them they all Fcking garbage this is my opinion dont care what the world loves if britney spears gets another #1 singel im gonna trow up

and this one

Just ask yourself are u happy with your life that you live everyday And where do u get your strengt to do what you feel to live your way Do u hate your life so much it makes you want to jump off a building One said death is easy cuz life is hard, but f*ck it we all still children

Added 6 years, 7 months ago by Tom - permalink

Cheese

Cheese, Cheese oh wonderous cheese, why does thou elude me so? Cheese cheese oh delicous cheese, You've gone bad and turned white, as the snow... Cheese cheese oh kinda stinky cheese, I am sorry why must you go?

By Tom

In honor of the cheese that went bad in the fridge today.(If cheese is spoiled milk or something... why does it go bad? why? I blame it on the black micheal jackson who was orginally white and rapes old men...)

Added 6 years, 7 months ago by Zero - permalink

you really, really need to stop talking

You will have to login before you can respond to Zero.
Added 6 years, 7 months ago by _Viracocha64 - permalink

Cardboard wings

Cardboard wings Make me fly Jump off a cliff Hope I don't die Flap my arms With all my might Hoping that I Will be granted flight. I fly through the air Hear a heavenly sound Endlessly spiraling Towards the ground. I reach my objective A point on the floor And splat like Applesauce.

Added 5 years, 3 months ago by _Cyrus - permalink

I love how my last post in this topic was April of 2005, since then there have been six posts... excluding mine of course.

Added 5 years, 3 months ago by Zero - permalink

lol yeah well were not big on poetry. not a very big surprise to me

Added 5 years, 3 months ago by _Cyrus - permalink

Well, there's always my patented "break-up poem";

Roses are Red Violets are Blue You sicken me.

On a side note, aren't violets..violet?

Added 5 years, 3 months ago by Zero - permalink

youd think so wouldnt you?

Added 5 years, 3 months ago by _Cyrus - permalink

You would if you were to take things literal, but then again... if anything was meant to be taken literally... well politicians would have to do stuff.

Added 5 years, 3 months ago by Human - permalink

You people are sick...

Added 5 years, 3 months ago by _Cyrus - permalink

If by "sick" you mean "pure unadulterated awesome" then yes, we're sick.

Also, I unstickied this... since it was originally stickied to create forum activity and well, it's not. If someone feels that this absolutely needs to be stickied go right ahead, but I figure if I can unsticky it and it dies... then it doesn't deserve stickiness.

That's right, be confused.